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PROCESS OF PREPARING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS MESSAGES

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Lesson 15
PROCESS OF PREPARING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS MESSAGES
3. Choose the ideas to include.
While answering a letter, one can underline the main points to discuss and get the ideas briefly on a pad. If
one is writing unsolicited or a complex message, one can begin by listing ideas as they come to mind. Then
most important facts can be changed into message. It is better that the message written to welcome a
customer should have other incentives or policies what the firm offers.
* Consider your reader's viewpoint (be in his place)
* Read company's document
* Talk with your colleagues, customer etc.
* Ask your audience for input
4. Collect all the facts to back up these ideas.
After the main ideas, the writer / speaker should ask himself what specific facts, updated figures or
quotations he needs. The knowledge of the company's policies, procedures, and product details is necessary
for an effective communication. A brochure, table picture, or product sample is also useful to enclose.
Find out
* be sure the information is accurate
* be sure the information is ethical
* be sure the information is pertinent
* select appropriate channel
5. Outline ­ organize ­ your message.
The order in which the ideas are to be presented is as important as the ideas themselves. Disorganized
writing reflects disorganized, illogical thought process or careless preparation.
Choose the organizational plan after the purpose has been finalized collecting all necessary facts. Ask
yourself: "How will the reader or listener react to these ideas?".
Beginnings & Endings
Dear Mr. Hassan,
You are right to expect high-quality merchandise from The Automatic Door Company; we try to give you
the best for your money and to stand behind our products when they fail as a result of defects in material
and workmanship, as our warranty states.
We appreciate your sending the door opener to us for analysis. It appears that the opener has got wet.
Excess moisture over a period of time causes this defect.
Our service manager estimates that cleaning and repairing your door opener would cost Rs. 250.
Since your door opener is several years old, you may want to consider buying a new one. We have made
many improvements to our door openers since yours was manufactured, including a sealed circuit board
that would prevent the possibility of damage from moisture. A new door opener, which costs Rs. 3500.00
postpaid, should give you even longer service than your old one did.
Please let us know whether you want us to repair or replace your opener.
Yours sincerely,
Beginnings & Endings
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Beginnings & Endings
The way you begin your message makes it clear whether your reader will respond favourably or
unfavourably to the message. When you are sure that your message has something favourable or neuter for
the reader, you must begin your message with the main idea or good-news in the beginning. The opening
must be impressive in a way that it captures the attention of the reader. So always choose appropriate
openings that suit the purpose of your message. The following openings are desirable in direct-request,
good-news and neutral messages.
Main Idea: The goods which you ordered on March 5 have been sent to you by passenger train.
Request: So that your order can be filled promptly, please send another copy of the requisition.
Announcement: Now you can take an air ­ conditioned coach from Lahore to Islamabad any hour.
Whenever required, employ 5Ws and one H to give clarity to your messages.
Buffer: If you have bad news, begin your message with a buffer. A buffer is a statement, that helps you
bring your reader in a positive frame of mind, and the message becomes readable for the reader. But
"Buffer" should be neutral in tone. You should also avoid misleading the reader into thinking that the
message is good.
Poor: It is impossible to open your account unless you send us the following information.
With buffer: The moment you send us the following information your account will be opened.
Poor: We never exchange damaged goods.
With buffer: We are happy to exchange the merchandise that is returned to us in good condition.
In persuasive request (sales letter), begin the message with an attention-getting statement. An experienced
writer uses some common technique to attract the reader. Consider some of attention-getting statements:
A challenge: Don't waste another day wondering how you're going to become the success you've always
wanted to be!
The writer should avoid using trite and stereotyped expressions. Make your openings considerate, courteous
concise, and clear. Keep your first paragraph short and use simple conversational language.
Never open your letter with an incomplete sentence like:
Reference to your letter of March 6 regarding opening of a current account.
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Make opening specific
Poor: Thank you for your order.
Specific:
Thank you for you order for 200 writing pads.
Close Paragraph
An effective ending will motivate the reader to act as requested. If no direct request is required, leave the
reader with some expression of regard, assurance, appreciation or willingness to help. Always remember
that closings should be strong, clear and polite. They should leave a sense of closure and goodwill with the
receiver.
1. Make your request clear and complete with Five Ws and the H.
2. Include your phone number and extension if you want the reader to phone you.
3. Enclose a form (card, order, blank, or questionnaire) and an addressed reply envelope (perhaps with
postage paid) if you want the reader to furnish something.
4. Give complete instructions regarding how and where if you do not include a form and envelope.
5. State your office hours and location if you want the reader to come to you in person. Do you have a free
parking lot? Where?
Close Paragraph
1. Make Action
Vague: I look forward to hearing from you regarding this matter.
Better: So that we can make appropriate arrangements for your visit, please call me at 541000, before
Friday, November 16, anytime between 9 A.M. and 5 P.M.
2. End on a Positive, Courteous Thought
Include Any Apologies and Negatives Before Last Paragraph. Study these examples:
Negative: I'm sorry we can't be more encouraging at this time.
Positive: We wish you success in your search for a position.
Be Friendly: Offer to help the reader further, if that is appropriate. Words like please or will you help soften
commands.
Good: If there is any further way we can assist you please call 555-4567 Monday through Friday
between 9 A.M. and 5 P.M.
Avoid: Thank you in advance for distributing these questionnaires to your employees.
Say: I will appreciate your distributing these questionnaires to your employees.
Give my regards to your lovely family. I enjoyed meeting them during the October conference.
3. Keep Last Paragraph Concise and Correct
Trim your last paragraph to five or fewer lines of complete sentences. Avoid unnecessary
repetition.
In short letters, the writer often gives his message and stops without any special formality: Make
your opening and closing paragraph shorter than average because the most important location in a letter is
the opening. The second most important is the closing.
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Table of Contents:
  1. COMMUNICATION:Definition of Communication, Communication & Global Market
  2. FLOW OF COMMUNICATION:Internal Communication, External Communication
  3. THEORIES OF COMMUNICATION:Electronic Theory, Rhetorical Theory
  4. THE PROCESS OF COMMUNICATION & MISCOMMUNICATION:Message
  5. BARRIERS IN EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION /COMMUNICATION FALLOFF
  6. NON- VERBAL COMMUNICATION:Analysing Nonverbal Communication
  7. NON- VERBAL COMMUNICATION:Environmental Factors
  8. TRAITS OF GOOD COMMUNICATORS:Careful Creation of the Message
  9. PRINCIPLES OF BUSINESS COMMUNICATION:Clarity
  10. CORRECTNESS:Conciseness, Conciseness Checklist, Correct words
  11. CONSIDERATION:Completeness
  12. INTERCULTURAL COMMUNICATION
  13. INTERCULTURAL COMMUNICATION:Education, Law and Regulations, Economics
  14. INDIVIDUAL CULTURAL VARIABLES:Acceptable Dress, Manners
  15. PROCESS OF PREPARING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS MESSAGES
  16. Composing the Messages:THE APPEARANCE AND DESIGN OF BUSINESS MESSAGES
  17. THE APPEARANCE AND DESIGN OF BUSINESS MESSAGES:Punctuation Styles
  18. COMMUNICATING THROUGH TECHNOLOGY:Email Etiquette, Electronic Media
  19. BASIC ORGANIZATIONAL PLANS:Writing Goodwill Letters
  20. LETTER WRITING:Direct Requests, Inquiries and General Requests
  21. LETTER WRITING:Replies to Inquiries, Model Letters
  22. LETTER WRITING:Placing Orders, Give the Information in a Clear Format
  23. LETTER WRITING:Claim and Adjustment Requests, Warm, Courteous Close
  24. LETTER WRITING:When The Buyer Is At Fault, Writing Credit Letters
  25. LETTER WRITING:Collection Letters, Collection Letter Series
  26. LETTER WRITING:Sales Letters, Know your Buyer, Prepare a List of Buyers
  27. MEMORANDUM & CIRCULAR:Purpose of Memo, Tone of Memorandums
  28. MINUTES OF THE MEETING:Committee Members’ Roles, Producing the Minutes
  29. BUSINESS REPORTS:A Model Report, Definition, Purpose of report
  30. BUSINESS REPORTS:Main Features of the Report, INTRODUCTION
  31. BUSINESS REPORTS:Prefatory Parts, Place of Title Page Items
  32. MARKET REPORTS:Classification of Markets, Wholesale Market
  33. JOB SEARCH AND EMPLOYMENT:Planning Your Career
  34. RESUME WRITING:The Chronological Resume, The Combination Resume
  35. RESUME & APPLICATION LETTER:Personal Details, Two Types of Job Letters
  36. JOB INQUIRY LETTER AND INTERVIEW:Understanding the Interview Process
  37. PROCESS OF PREPARING THE INTERVIEW:Planning for a Successful Interview
  38. ORAL PRESENTATION:Planning Oral Presentation, To Motivate
  39. ORAL PRESENTATION:Overcoming anxiety, Body Language
  40. LANGUAGE PRACTICE AND NEGOTIATION SKILLS:Psychological barriers
  41. NEGOTIATION AND LISTENING:Gather information that helps you
  42. THESIS WRITING AND PRESENTATION:Write down your ideas
  43. THESIS WRITING AND PRESENTATION:Sections of a Thesis (Format)
  44. RESEARCH METHODOLOGY:Studies Primarily Qualitative in Nature
  45. RESEARCH METHODOLOGY:Basic Rules, Basic Form, Basic Format for Books